Kia takahia wanahia nei taku ara-tewha, he manakanaka tonu nei te mamae. Nā, takahia takahia I te pū o te kōpīpī. Engari nei i te ngaringari o te raro, Nā kōpīpī te whakahē. Na, mō te ngerongero ka tū I te wehi o te mate, a ngerongero ka tau I te wehi o te ora..
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
Arotahi
Focus
your objective. What
is the purpose of the material you want to write? Writing can help
you achieve the five I's: It can inform, inquire, influence, instruct
and incite.
Focus
your audience. Written
materials such as reports and brochures can be valuable positioning
tools. They should be written with a specific audience in mind -- the
audience you wish to influence to buy your products or services.
Focus
your content. Make
sure that your message is the right message for the right audience.
Don't let unnecessary ideas intrude on your principal message. To
quote Professor William Strunk Jr., the renowned authority on English
usage:
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"A
sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no
unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should
have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts."
Focus
your organization. A
good piece of writing flows like a symphony. Organize your material
so that each topic flows easily and naturally into the next.
Focus
your clarity. Some
writers think they can hide fuzzy thinking by burying it under a mass
of words. To have impact, ideas must be expressed precisely and
concisely. Lincoln's Gettysburg Address required only 275 words, and
196 of them were of one syllable.
Focus
your refinement. Perfection
rarely emerges from a first draft. Ambrose Bierce once said that "a
saint is a dead sinner revised and edited." Great writing is
rough copy revised and edited.
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Saturday, December 11, 2010
Ko te Pire o te Takutaimoana ko te wahi o te Takutaimoana arā te Marine Coastal Bill
Kaare au te tino mohio o tēnei pire, i whakaarohia, he momo whakanekehanga ki mua i pa ana ki ngā torangapū o te takutaimoana, no reira he aha te ngako o tēnei pire, o tēnei ture hoki? He aha te whakamāramatanga o te ture i runga i a tātou te Iwi Māori. Ka heke mai he tau hou, ka heke mai he pire hou. Kei a tatou nga kaitorangapu me pehea ou ratou whakaaro o tēnei pire.
E kitea kē tetahi tangata e ruaki ki te kitea o te takutai moana pire, nō reira pehea a tatou Ngai Iwi Māori i te whakautu o tēnei ruakitanga o te Pakeha, ka haere ki te United Nations hei whakahaerehia i te pire o tēnei ture.
Ko tēnei whakautu nekehanga o te pōna, he pakaritanga e rere ana mai te kaituhi, te kamupene o te Niupēpa "The Marlborough Xpress".
Ko tētahi whainga o tēnei pire hei whakapiki ake i te raruraru o te pire o te Pāti Reipa arā ko te Takautai Moana Seabed and Foreshore.
Ko Tom Morrison te koromatua o tēnei rohe a Marlborough te tangata i pūpu ake tēnei raru ki te ao. Ko te awangawanga o ēnei tangata i mahi ana i roto i te ao o Tangaroa, e pa ana i te kare a roto te whakaitihia o te tangata tauiwi e pa ana ki te tango kai o tēnei rohe, na, ka peehi rawa te katoa o te motu hei hoopu i te kai o Tangaroa.
Ara, ko tēnei te taake hei raruraru ai i te timatanga ko wai, no wai o ngā tangata ka taea te tango i te kai a Tangaroa. E hiahia ana nga tauiwi kaare ratou i whanau mai nei i Aotearoa nei, engari ratou e hiahia ana i te hua mai o ngā kai e hoko atu.
Ko te take e whakaatu atu ki Ngai Iwi Maori hei whakatō i to mana hei ahei ana koe i te tango i te kaimoana Tangaroa. Ā ka taea e koe i te taunakihia i te mana whenua o te rohe o te Takutai Moana a ake ne pea ka taea e koe i te mahi. Kaare koe i taunakihia mai tēnei marae mai tēnei rohe ā he tāke.
Kei te rangona i te karere a te Pāti Reipa i te tango ta ratou tunga o tēnei Pire he whai whakaaro o ratou tu o tēnei taake. E panuihia i te tautoko a te Maori Pāti i te tango tautoko mo tēnei Pire, ka taka tēnei pire, ka waiho.
Ka tapiri ki tēnei karere o te Takutai, he whai whakaaro o tērā o te tangata Tākuta Hugh Barr ka puta mai te raruraru o te Pakeha ka taea te Tauiwi ka tu mo te e4 miniti kē, ka hoki ki te taha o te Māori ratou ka taea ka ahei i te tū mo te wa roa. E hoha pea tēnei tangata i te hakarongo i tēnei tāke o te Māori.
Anei ko tēnei te ngako o te pire:
E kitea kē tetahi tangata e ruaki ki te kitea o te takutai moana pire, nō reira pehea a tatou Ngai Iwi Māori i te whakautu o tēnei ruakitanga o te Pakeha, ka haere ki te United Nations hei whakahaerehia i te pire o tēnei ture.
Ko tēnei whakautu nekehanga o te pōna, he pakaritanga e rere ana mai te kaituhi, te kamupene o te Niupēpa "The Marlborough Xpress".
Ko tētahi whainga o tēnei pire hei whakapiki ake i te raruraru o te pire o te Pāti Reipa arā ko te Takautai Moana Seabed and Foreshore.
Ko Tom Morrison te koromatua o tēnei rohe a Marlborough te tangata i pūpu ake tēnei raru ki te ao. Ko te awangawanga o ēnei tangata i mahi ana i roto i te ao o Tangaroa, e pa ana i te kare a roto te whakaitihia o te tangata tauiwi e pa ana ki te tango kai o tēnei rohe, na, ka peehi rawa te katoa o te motu hei hoopu i te kai o Tangaroa.
Ara, ko tēnei te taake hei raruraru ai i te timatanga ko wai, no wai o ngā tangata ka taea te tango i te kai a Tangaroa. E hiahia ana nga tauiwi kaare ratou i whanau mai nei i Aotearoa nei, engari ratou e hiahia ana i te hua mai o ngā kai e hoko atu.
Ko te take e whakaatu atu ki Ngai Iwi Maori hei whakatō i to mana hei ahei ana koe i te tango i te kaimoana Tangaroa. Ā ka taea e koe i te taunakihia i te mana whenua o te rohe o te Takutai Moana a ake ne pea ka taea e koe i te mahi. Kaare koe i taunakihia mai tēnei marae mai tēnei rohe ā he tāke.
Kei te rangona i te karere a te Pāti Reipa i te tango ta ratou tunga o tēnei Pire he whai whakaaro o ratou tu o tēnei taake. E panuihia i te tautoko a te Maori Pāti i te tango tautoko mo tēnei Pire, ka taka tēnei pire, ka waiho.
Ka tapiri ki tēnei karere o te Takutai, he whai whakaaro o tērā o te tangata Tākuta Hugh Barr ka puta mai te raruraru o te Pakeha ka taea te Tauiwi ka tu mo te e4 miniti kē, ka hoki ki te taha o te Māori ratou ka taea ka ahei i te tū mo te wa roa. E hoha pea tēnei tangata i te hakarongo i tēnei tāke o te Māori.
Anei ko tēnei te ngako o te pire:
- Ka waiho i te Karauna te mana whakahaere o te Takutai Moana na ma te mana whenua ka taea i te haerehia o te Takutai
- Ka ahei i te Iwi ka tono mo te mana whakahaere o te Takutai Moana, me ma te Minita o te Takutai ka ahei i te mana whakahaere
- Ka ahei e te Iwi Mana haere i te whakato ngā rohe tata atu i te wahanga o te Takutai e to ana
- Ka ahei i te mana o te Takutai engari horekau he whenua e pa ki te Takutai engari he wahi o mua o te mana whakahaere
- Ka ahei i te rahui o etahi wahi
He pire tino whakahirahira i tēnei wa ko ērā o nga mana motuhaketanga o ngai Iwi o Aotearoa. Ka ahei i te komiti i te whakaroaroa te wa mo te tino whakaaetanga o ngai Iwi katoa e ki mai a Tākuta Barr.
Friday, November 19, 2010
Kia ora te ao hikoreta
He wa roa ano ki te haere mai nei engari ka waihoia etahi atu mahi kua kau ake era atu. Kupu hou: Ringa rehe tera o te ringa raupa?
I whakaarohia ka tapiri ano tetahi pikitia no reira ki te rautaki a Haka Fitness anei:
I whakaarohia ka tapiri ano tetahi pikitia no reira ki te rautaki a Haka Fitness anei:
Thursday, November 11, 2010
Kua pau te werawera
E mara! Ko te po o te wa e pau ana, e haere mai ahau i runga i konei aha ranei te mea toko maha o nga mahi.
Okea ururoatia, ana, ko te whakamarama. Tino whakapaua o kaha kiaputa to ihu, kia kore to kaupapa a koe tonu ranei e hinga. Karawhiua ana!
No reira me haere tonu ahau, e whakahoki ki te mahi, ihu ki raro, paua aku ringa, tou ki runga me ki.
Okea ururoatia, ana, ko te whakamarama. Tino whakapaua o kaha kiaputa to ihu, kia kore to kaupapa a koe tonu ranei e hinga. Karawhiua ana!
Saturday, September 25, 2010
Undermining our own economics in Aotearoa in terms of third world countires
Environmental control? Ko tatou te iwi Maori te mea nui i arahi nga tangata whenua o te ao? This is often what is thought by other indigenous nations of the world.Do we want to improve infrastructure in Aotearoa? Sounds like that is what Hone Kii wants? But what does he really mean. Will it assist te iwi Maori, do we have access, will it improve maori criminal statistics and will Ngai Maori be considered when the red tape is lifted?
The environment, lifting productivity, declining baseline, operating efficiently including improvements in policy. Base lining in government terms is funding so could be $30million, so over the next 3 years in will go down and you have to stick to the budget. there could be $5 million on top for other operating projects. So the baseline is the base of funding. Labour Govt however wanted to increase its capacity didn't want Maori National is into less beaureacracy.
Priorities are alot lesser.
Improving NZs freshwater management
Developing an EPA, vote climate change.
maori invovlement, matauranga maori, resource management and aligning the government priorities, aligning broad policies? So how much money do they need?
Minister levels to set these processes up. Its about putting your bids in at policy level, to your policy managers, strategically budgetting your policies. Knowing how to position your money in a government level. No performance no funding.
How does Maori have an influence on Hone's whakaaro, nga putea, the planning cycle and annually from the budget through to March the announcements in July 2011. You need to start planning now to get your appointments for January 2011.
So our days such as the 25th at Ratana and the Waitangi day celebrations are important 2 help portray your views to government in terms of Maori.
This is the executive summary explaining about the budget:
Executive Summary
New Zealand is on the road to recovery. The worst of the global economic and financial crisis now looks to have passed. The new Government’s first year was devoted to weathering the recession, helping New Zealanders keep their jobs and assisting them to find new ones.The Government's emphasis is now shifting towards getting the economy growing again and ensuring that this growth is higher and more sustainable than New Zealand has seen in recent years. Growth matters because it creates jobs, increases incomes and improves the living standards of New Zealand families.
The updated Treasury forecasts show that both growth and New Zealand's fiscal outlook are better than previously expected. This is for two reasons: the global economy has stabilised and government initiatives of the past year to fight the recession have borne fruit.
However, this does not mean that all the problems of the recession have passed. The risks that growth could weaken again remain. Unemployment is forecast to peak sooner and lower than predicted previously but will remain at elevated levels throughout 2010, even as the economy improves. The year ahead will still be difficult for many New Zealanders.
The fiscal position also remains challenging. Budget 2009 stopped the growth of low-value government spending and provided a credible programme to contain debt levels. Even so, the forecast operating deficit for 2010/11 is $6.7 billion and the Government's accounts are not expected to return to surplus until 2016. This is despite the projections assuming both long term restraint in spending and an upwards creep in average tax rates caused by increasing numbers of taxpayers entering the top tax brackets. There is little room for slippage.
We have implemented a significant programme to get through the recession in better shape than most other developed countries and we are now building on that programme to ensure New Zealand achieves a step-change in its economic performance.
This includes:
- investment in productive infrastructure
- removing red tape and improving regulation
- supporting business innovation and trade
- improving education and lifting skills
- lifting productivity and improving services in the public sector, and
- strengthening the tax system.
Budget 2010 will set out the next steps in the Government's growth strategy while continuing the emphasis on sound public finances heralded in Budget 2009.
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